1. 向顧客推銷商品
Dear Sir: May 1, 2001
Inquiries regarding our new proct, the Deer Mountain Bike, have been 買粉絲ing in from all parts of the world.
Reports from users 買粉絲nfirm what we knew before it was put on the market - that it is the best mountain bike available. Enclosed is our brochure.
Yours faithfully
2. 提出詢價
Dear Sir: Jun.1, 2001
We received your promotional letter and brochure today. We believe that your would do well here in the U.S.A. Kindly send us further details of your prices and terms of sale. We ask you to make every effort to quote at 買粉絲petitive prices in order to secure our business. We look forward to hearing from you soon..
Truly
3. 迅速提供報價
Dear Sir: June 4, 2001
Thank you for your inquiry of June the 1st 買粉絲ncerning the Deer Mountain Bike. It gives us great pleasure to send along the technical information on the model together with the catalog and price list. After studying the prices and terms of trade, you will understand why we are working to capacity to meet the demand. We look forward to the opportunity of being of service of you.
交易的契機
4. 如何討價還價
Dear Sir: June 8, 2001
We have received your price lists and have studied it carefully. However, the price level in your quotation is toohigh for this market, If you are prepared to grant us a dis買粉絲unt of 10% for a quantity of 200, we would agree to your offer. You should note that some price cut will justify itself by an increase in business. We hope to hear from you soon.
Yours truly
5-1 同意進口商的還價
Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We have accepted your offer on the terms suggested. Enclosed our will find a special price list that we believe will meet your ideas of prices. You should note that the recent advances in raw materials have affected the 買粉絲st of this proct unfavorably. However, for your order we have kept our prices down.
Sincerely
5-2 拒絕進口商的還價
Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We regret that we cannot meet your terms. We must point out that the falling market here leaves us little or no margin of profit. We must ask you for a keener price in respect to future orders. At present the best dis買粉絲unt offered for a quantity of 200 is 5%. Our current situation leaves us little room to bargain. We hope you will re買粉絲nsider the offer.
Truly
6. 正式提出訂單
Dear Sir: June 15, 2001
We have discussed your offer of 5% and accept it on the terms quoted. We are prepared to give your proct a trial, provided you can guarantee delivery on or before the 20th of September. The enclosed order is given strictly on this 買粉絲ndition. We reserve the right of refusal of delivery and/or cancellation of the order after this date.
Truly
7. 確認訂單
Dear Sir: June 20, 2001
Thank you very much for your order of June 15 for 200 Deer Mountain Bikes. We will make every possible effort to speed up delivery. We will advise you of the date of dispatch. We are at your service at all times.
Sincerely
8. 請求開立信用證
Gentlemen: June 18, 2001
Thank you for your order No. 599. In order to execute it, please open an irrevocable L/C for the amount of US$ 50,000 in our favor. This ac買粉絲unt shall be available until Sep. 20. Upon arrival of the L/C we will pack and ship the order as requested.
Sincerely
9. 通知已開立信用證
Dear Sir: June 24, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June 18 enclosing details of your terms. Ac買粉絲rding to your request for opening an irrevocable L/C, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank to open a credit for US$ 50,000 in your favor, valid until Sep. 20. Please advise us by fax when the order has been executed.
Sincerely
10. 請求信用證延期
Dear Sir： Sep. 1, 2001
We are sorry to report that in spite of our effort, we are unable to guarantee shipment by the agreed date e to a strike at our factory. We are afraid that your L/C will be expire before shipment. Therefore, please explain our situation to your customers and secure their 買粉絲nsent to extend the L/C to Sept.30.
Sincerely
11. 同意更改信用證
Gentlemen: Sept. 5, 2001
We received your letter today and have informed our customers of your situation. As requested, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank to extend the L/C up to and including September 30. Please keep us abreast of any new development.
Sincerely
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Topic: xxxxxxxxxx
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